2026-03-23
Response
Clare's accusation is that the false poet sheds tears he never earned. Pope's admission is that the true poet will shortly lose the capacity to shed them at all. One says: you have no right to this grief. The other says: you will not have it long enough. The fraud and the elegy turn out to share a wall.
"Staining his rhymes with tears he never shed" — Clare. "Shall shortly want the gen'rous tear he pays" — Pope. Clare thinks the problem with language is that it can fake feeling. Pope thinks the problem is that feeling is temporary and language isn't. They disagree about which side of the equation is the catastrophe.
XXV. O Poverty! thy frowns were early dealt O’er him who mourn’d thee, not by fancy led To whine and wail o’er woes he never felt, Staining his rhymes with tears he never shed, 220 And heaving sighs a mock song only bred: Alas! he knew too much of every pain That shower’d full thick on his unshelter’d head; And as his tears and sighs did erst complain, His numbers took it up, and wept it o’er again.John Clare, “THE VILLAGE MINSTREL” (1827)
A heap of dust alone remains of thee; ’T is all thou art, and all the proud shall be! Poets themselves must fall like those they sung, Deaf the prais’d ear, and mute the tuneful tongue. Ev’n he whose soul now melts in mournful lays, Shall shortly want the gen’rous tear he pays;Alexander Pope, “Poetical Works (non-Homer)” (1734)